my 6 sentence story

 Once upon a time there was a young talented designer. She lives in a warm cottage in a forest.She was famous for making warm clothes. One day she saw another clothing shop open nearby. She felt jealous and worried that all the customers would go next door. Then she wen't to the shop and asked if the wanted to work together.

my dad

 Let me tell you something about my dad my dad is a car  macanic . My  dad hasn't showered for the past 9 years. my dad has blonde hair and it is bright as a light bulb. My dad is almost as tall as a door frame. my dad is so kind she help me clean the house. My dad moves  like my granny who move slow with her walking .