This is one of my quick writes.
The reason school is finishing early because kittens will rain down and we won't be able to get out. But some people don't get home in time. I will pat and keep alot of cats. kittens are so cute and cuddly
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This is one of my quick writes.
The reason school is finishing early because kittens will rain down and we won't be able to get out. But some people don't get home in time. I will pat and keep alot of cats. kittens are so cute and cuddly
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ReplyDeleteHi Renee it is good because I love kitties
ReplyDeletety royal i love kittens too But KITTENS WILL RAIN SOON
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ReplyDeleteHi Renee,
ReplyDeleteI giggled at this - imagine if school actually did have to close early because of kittens! I would definitely try and take a few home with me. I wonder - do all the kittens that fall survive? Do they get saved and go to nice homes? I would love some more information!
Judith